dont require all signers to consider themselves community members who want osi to...

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 ## Call for resolution
 
-As community members who care about OSI's mission and its standing
-in the world, we wish to see OSI thrive in good standing.
-We do not endorse particular candidates or policy positions.
-We believe that everyone should care about transparency regardless
-of whether we are supportive, critical, or neutral on the policy
-concerns brought up in the election.
+Many of us are community members who care about OSI's mission and wish
+to see OSI thrive in good standing. This petition does not endorse
+particular candidates or policy positions. We believe that everyone
+should care about transparency regardless of whether we are supportive,
+critical, or neutral on the policy concerns brought up in the election.
 
 **To restore credibility and integrity, we call on OSI to:**