improve accuracy

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@@ -55,13 +55,16 @@ publication if any candidates failed to sign.
 
 - Bentley Hensel was unable to respond within the surprise 47-hour
   deadline.
-- Richard Fontana and Bradley Kuhn had publicly raised concerns about a
-  clause in the agreement that could restrict their speech
-  indefinitely. They planned to seek clarification before signing. Confronted with a the new deadline, they proposed amendments,
-  which OSI does not appear to have considered.
-
- [*LWN* covers many more details of the OSI election](https://lwn.net/SubscriberLink/1014603/ac0cfc0a74755501/)
-and within its conclusion notes:
+- Richard Fontana and Bradley Kuhn's [election
+  platform](https://codeberg.org/OSI-Reform-Platform/platform) was
+  critical of a clause in the board member agreement and stated "We
+  insist that this provision be reformulated with less sweeping and more
+  conventional language [...]" They had hoped to communicate with the
+  OSI board about this issue if they won an election. Confronted with a
+  the new deadline, they proposed amendments, but got no response.
+
+ [*LWN*'s OSI election coverage](https://lwn.net/SubscriberLink/1014603/ac0cfc0a74755501/)
+has many additional important details which build up to this note:
 > "A cynical person might conclude that the last-minute requirement
 > to sign the agreement was to disqualify one or both because they would
 > have won otherwise; and that the OSI leadership was unwilling to have